wowzer i wrote a song

Well I've just sort of combined my experiences in college and my views on life right now into this baby. I hope to get recording stuff soon. As for now the lyrics will have to be sufficient.

"Imprint, Enjoy, Relax" (title debatable, any suggestions will be gladly taken into consideration) (thats actually part of the title) (just kidding)

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these times will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

We'll drive these back road until we are lost
Find those sacred places where we can talk
Whether it be by the river or a deserted hangar
Its my friends that form my memories not the chaos surrounding me

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these time will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

First warm day of the year traditionally
We have to celebrate the anticipation of spring
You grab the pen and I'll get the paper
We'll sit in the grass and we'll play what life is made of

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these times will not repass
Cliche as it is those times will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

Sorry if there are any typos.

Originally Posted by: iihollyTread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these times will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

We'll drive these back road until we are lost
Find those sacred places where we can talk
Whether it be by the river or a deserted hangar
Its my friends that form my memories not the chaos surrounding me

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these time will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

First warm day of the year traditionally
We have to celebrate the anticipation of spring
You grab the pen and I'll get the paper
We'll sit in the grass and we'll play what life is made of

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these times will not repass
Cliche as it is those times will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

Sorry if there are any typos.

I likes it. I boldified the parts I like the very best. I also think the chorus is absolutely excellent, I just didn't feel like boldening it every time.

Groovy baby! Nice use of words.
I'd probably narrow the title down to just "Relax" but it might get confused with that Frankie Goes to Hollywood title.

I do like it, it's original.
I think you should leave the title.