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earthman buck
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03/10/2007 1:56 am
Originally Posted by: iihollyTread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these times will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

We'll drive these back road until we are lost
Find those sacred places where we can talk
Whether it be by the river or a deserted hangar
Its my friends that form my memories not the chaos surrounding me

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these time will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

First warm day of the year traditionally
We have to celebrate the anticipation of spring

You grab the pen and I'll get the paper
We'll sit in the grass and we'll play what life is made of

Tread heavily my dear
Imprint, enjoy, relax
Cliche as it is these times will not repass
Cliche as it is those times will not repass
Imprint, enjoy, relax

Sorry if there are any typos.

I likes it. I boldified the parts I like the very best. I also think the chorus is absolutely excellent, I just didn't feel like boldening it every time.