ok, so i woke up one morning and wrote this, what you think?
falling to the floor, from hearing
three words, nothing more, saying
she told me, she said "she really likes you"
now i'm on the phone, and talking, bout
waffle ice cream cones, just rambling
until i say i've loved talking today
and then i ask her if she's free
tomorrow to grab a cup of coffee, with me
then she gasps and whispers back
three words, i'd like that
now i'm falling
now i'm falling off my feet
she said i'd like that, now i
like you can't do any more for me
but its ok
because she said "i'd like that"
now a couple dates, have gone by
nothing much has changed, but now i
think about her all the time all day and night
now in our daily conversation
i tell her she's my sole obsession
she gasps again, begins to mew,
and says "i think about you too."
now i'm falling
now i'm falling off my feet
she said i'm thinking bout you, now i'd
like that can't do any more for me
but its ok
because she's "thinking bout me"
weeks, months, a year has gone by
i love her here, i love my life and
i think i've fallen in love with her tonight
so tonight i'm gonna tell her
those three words, how i feel about her
she nearly breaks down after "you"
and whispers that she loves me too
now i'm falling
now i'm falling off my feet
she said i love you, now i'm thinking
bout you can't do any more for me
but its ok
coz she's in love with me
say it
say it twice
openly, not a message in disguise
say you love me
pledge your heart to mine
no more
no more words
left to describe us, its absurd
i wish love had another level
because love just can't say how i feel
now i'm falling
now i'm falling off my feet
she said i love you, but i'm thinking
i love you no longer works for me
now i'm running
now i'm running from my mouth
my words have trapped me, i can't get out
all thats left to say
is i hate you.
leave and don't come back.
i wish we'd left it at i'd like that.
any tips, pointers, changes to lines, etc welcome.
thanks in advance,
g-rant
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