i am gonna try this again

hey guys
i am gonna try this again
and hopefully i will be a lil more open-minded :rolleyes:
ok
let me just try to describe why i wrote this song
i am gonna sorta get right to the point ;)
theres a girl
and she is everything a guy can ask for but for some reason you just cant go out with her
well i have the music for it just not the words and i have been worken with some lyrics for a while ok here i go again:

The Way You Makes Me Feel
by Aaron
when i close my eyes, i begin to think of you
when i open my eyes, i am all alone

ok thats all i can thing of
anyone have any suggestions on how to think up words
cus its killing me
i have all these songs but no lyrics.......
any help will do :o
k thanks guys

hey ok i took your advice and i have been studying english and so i wrote down some little things i thought of for songs and this is one of them ok:

he was sitting a little of to the side
smoken his stog
and he was looking for his next victom
when his eyes hit me
well i wasnt going to fast
so i invited him down to my side of the bar
he was so slick and cool
man you should have seen this guy
i mellowed the devil
i have tamed wild dogs
i have marched with the mushrooms, baby
and i still havent had my fall
well the next day he was back
ya the devil was back at my door
he wanted to come in a get some more
haha and he got high again
man what a cat
and he was just lieing there laughing
o ya good times boys
here we go again (solo)

ya thats the end
its a blues song well tell me whatcha thing hehe
:D even thou i cant write lyrics i still can play guitar
well sorta haha
k later dudes :cool:

the first was ok sort of cliche. the other i dont now of any person would want to listen to a song about dogs babys and mushrooms. i think you have some more studying. it might help if you take a poetry class