Miss Fire, Writing an Original Song

Miss Fire! An original track in E minor with a racing‑themed engine‑groove feel. Features blues‑influenced call‑and‑response lead lines, SRV‑style phrasing fused with power‑metal rhythm, and a key change into A minor blues. Loud, expressive, and built around pedal tone drive and engine grooves.

I was studying some Ghost to form the main riff. I can't play SRV yet, but I can feel his signature style, and I'm trying to bring it through on the chorus section. 

Miss Fire, Writing an Original

Sound great Kyle, keep working on it!👍🤘

https://youtu.be/J_4Vvol6wRU

https://youtu.be/J_4Vvol6wRU

Hey man, have to add to this, just stuff that jumps out as I hear the tune, hope you don't mind.

"those flames you like so much 
just dance around your head
you may not realize
keep it up you'll soon be dead"

haha, keep writing man

Bill

Thanks, dudes! I didn't play yesterday, if you can believe it. I do agree that the lead lines require work. I think ending the second one on a C isn't helping. I'll try a B-flat bend to B or something.