Miss Fire, Writing an Original Song

Miss Fire! An original track in E minor with a racing‑themed engine‑groove feel. Features blues‑influenced call‑and‑response lead lines, SRV‑style phrasing fused with power‑metal rhythm, and a key change into A minor blues. Loud, expressive, and built around pedal tone drive and engine grooves.

I was studying some Ghost to form the main riff. I can't play SRV yet, but I can feel his signature style, and I'm trying to bring it through on the chorus section. 

Miss Fire, Writing an Original

Sound great Kyle, keep working on it!👍🤘

https://youtu.be/J_4Vvol6wRU

https://youtu.be/J_4Vvol6wRU

Hey man, have to add to this, just stuff that jumps out as I hear the tune, hope you don't mind.

"those flames you like so much 
just dance around your head
you may not realize
keep it up you'll soon be dead"

haha, keep writing man

Bill

Thanks, dudes! I didn't play yesterday, if you can believe it. I do agree that the lead lines require work. I think ending the second one on a C isn't helping. I'll try a B-flat bend to B or something. 

Hey

long time coming back to this because your main riff sparked those lyrics I posted and I wanted to do something with them. Btw, I did listen to your full song and you have some good stuff going on there. 

So those lyrics, which were inspired by your riff had some meaning behind them as my lyrics normally do. I went to school with two guys back in the 70’s who never made it through the 80’s because of bad choices. And for some reason as I was listening to your riff those words came up and I thought of those two guys. 

But as much as I like listening to metal on occasion, I don’t actually play it and neither does my group of friends. So I took those lyrics and put them into the style of music that I like to play, a lot of which would be described as acoustic folky grunge. So I started messing with the lyrics and my acoustic guitar, and I played what I had for a friend of mine, and I could tell by his reaction that he thought the lyrics were too dark. So I redid the lyrics and took out the “ D” word and put my lyrics into Suno. And full disclosure here, for two years now all my songs have been written with Suno because I can’t write music and neither can any of my friends even the ones who think they can. Our music is dull boring and always the same. 
So after some tweaking with Suno, I hit what to me is the perfect style of music I like to play. And my story of Mike and Steve is now put to music.

I played this for my buddy last Wednesday and he is going to show it to his brother who has what I think is the perfect voice for this.

So if you want to check out what your riff inspired, I posted a link of my Soundslice file. I’m transcribing the chords now. 

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Bill

Hey, man. 

Thanks for sharing that story with me. It's and odd clarity looking back when you know the end of some people's books. Then the brain pulls that damage out of nowhere. Sorry about them memories, Bill. 

I had a friend in high-school who tried to save a kid one morning. His name was Donald. He picked the kid up in his arms and jumped as far as could. The kid died and Donald ended up with metal plates in his spine. They were hit by a drunk driver walking to school. 

We grew apart after the years as his views on life tarnished. Sucks. 

Anyway, thanks again for sharing your story, dude. Cool track. 

Glad you liked the song, the older I get the more I pull from the past. I think about these two from time to time because of stupid choices - as in drugs. They can mess you up.
Mike road his motor bike head first into an on coming car buzzed up and being chased by the cops and I never really found out exactly what happened to Steve other than drugs were involved. Choices.