Man I've heard death metal before and I do like some of it. Other stuff I don't like, but man please your lyrics suck . It definetly isn't dark and scary and the whole song pretty much is just talking about blood. BLOOD IS'N'T DARK OR SCARY MAN. I've seen some badly written songs before but man that is some of the worst stuff I've ever read. Sorry man but it does need alot of work.

BOB