I only found "He died"

First up:
Vocals: I think these need to be brought down into the mix a bit. Id use less reverb and more compression. You could make this sound a lot nicer by using harmonies but, be sure they are in as out of tune harmonies will kill a song dead in the water. All it takes is a little practice. Also experiment with the different intervals, substituting a 4th for a 3rd can make a big difference!

Lead guitar: Id bring this back into the mix as it is too loud relative to the rest of the back line

Hope this helps
S