My Original Song

Hey Guys check out my 1st composition :) and coment i need advice !

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usTsoLIcxS8

Hey, that's a nice song you put together there!

Hey...Just wanted to give you some feedback...hope you take this all the right way because it's all meant to be constructive...!!! What you have written here is a good solid backing track rather than a song...I think your rhythm playing is really solid...your timing is perfect...!!! My advice to you would be to try to find a band to play with because that's always the best way to progress. As i said, what you are doing you are doing really well...!!!