Hey...Just wanted to give you some feedback...hope you take this all the right way because it's all meant to be constructive...!!! What you have written here is a good solid backing track rather than a song...I think your rhythm playing is really solid...your timing is perfect...!!! My advice to you would be to try to find a band to play with because that's always the best way to progress. As i said, what you are doing you are doing really well...!!!