But, I'd be happy to give your lyrics a once over, if you don't mind writing them out for me. You've got the Copyrights already, I'm sure... so if you want to post them, I'll go over them.
If you don't have the copyrights, please get them FIRST. Then post.
I really think the song has merit, so I'm glad you didn't take my comments as criticism 'period', cuz criticize is not what I meant to do.