First song- Please Rate!!!

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please rate my song, this is my first one. There are no vocals because the lyrics are on the way. I would like if u could rate it and comment if u could!!! thank you!!!

I cant rate it since i have no mixing experience but overall i like the sound youve come up with. Theres an annoying sound in there during the softer parts, not sure what it is, sounds like a typewriter :confused: ...otherwise a cool track.

I liked the softer parts, the distorted parts didn't do it for me.

Originally Posted by: mpaqI cant rate it since i have no mixing experience but overall i like the sound youve come up with. Theres an annoying sound in there during the softer parts, not sure what it is, sounds like a typewriter :confused: ...otherwise a cool track.

ya, lol, that was sound of my pick hitting the guitar strings, in other words, i did not record it properly. my bad :o i guess i was hoping no one would notice? lol. ya but the good part is that it is just a demo for now, i will definately re-record this when i get the vocals.

also, did anyone find the acoustic guitar coming in at 1:39 off beat?


thank you guys for your reviews! keep em' comin'!!

I liked the groove of the bass and drums.

The distorted guitar at the chorus is way too hot, bring the distortion down a little and get rid off the typewriter sound. :)
I did notice the acoustic guitar and kinda sounds slightly out of tune to me. The track could do fine without it.

Overall, not bad.
Liked the lyrics too. Did you write them?

Oh yeah, one more thing. You need a nicer ending or outro.
Just my opinion ;)