I liked the groove of the bass and drums.

The distorted guitar at the chorus is way too hot, bring the distortion down a little and get rid off the typewriter sound. :)
I did notice the acoustic guitar and kinda sounds slightly out of tune to me. The track could do fine without it.

Overall, not bad.
Liked the lyrics too. Did you write them?

Oh yeah, one more thing. You need a nicer ending or outro.
Just my opinion ;)