I see you're an Ibanez user too;-) Had a listen to it at low volume, sounds like it has promise - would obviously benefit from a bass and some double tracking of the guitars. The drums sounded live, if they are then get a take of them by themselves and layer the guitars back home, try panning a track left and right with some kind of harmony line in the centre (eg if you are playing an open E power chord then you could try playing an octave higher for the track panned to dead centre). Next part is to add the is either vocals or lead. Has potential to be a rockin tune though.