New song

new song up, check it :)

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Take it it's the 'Twilight' song? Really good song. Loved the layered vocals and the lead tone. Personally, I'd have liked the lead over the chorus taken down just a touch to let the voice through a bit more. The short understated solo was really cool.

Enjoyed listening.

Hi James, good to see you posting again. I'm listening to Twilight II...
Either the clean guitar was recorded with some very small timing slips OR it was recorded with delay on - whichever it was the delay magnifies it a bit. If you recorded with the delay live the problem could be that the delay isn't sinchronised to the bpm of the song. A VST delay is the best cure for that. Only a mild criticism, nice flowing idea and theme. You taking this one to a full song? Right where it ends I was expecting an explosion of fast heavy guitars to jump in, interested to see where you take this one.

Hey superhuman - actually the delay is the right timing (to my ears anyway)

and as a matter of fact it Did go into a heavy part, I chopped it off since the vibe of what I had didn't quite fit


Wriggler - it is indeed the Twilight song, however I think the one you're describing is "No Excuses" ? Glad you liked it though :)


Thanks guys for checking it out!

Ooops...! You're right, I must have missed the 'click' and didn't notice the title in the player... sorry, I'll listen better next time! :o

I thought it was good. I didn't here it go out of time myself but I'm no pro. It's a good start but needs completion I think. It felt like more of an intro to something bigger to me. I liked the other tunes too by the way.

Yeah Nick, it's an intro to another separate song that starts off in a related key, but with different dynamics/sounds etc, so it didn't sound right to leave them together as one song

Glad you liked!