Never Look

Never Never Look


What a lame duck
A really silver ****
A never never look
and all the **** I took

And when I go home now
an empty heart some how
an empty jar of worms
soul just screams and squirms
but if the end came down
and all there was was stoned
then we won't return
[to] a life not perfect learned

[so] what was was was
more tv fuzz
instead to think
just let me sink

Live just knowing new life
is waiting when your knife
cuts out cancer's sighs
live to know knew highs
but if the end came down
before the light could show
what a shame should be
is what would be in me

survive the night
and super might
be weak if you
only ever knew

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I think it's done I stopped writing it, that's for sure. :)

Sorry but it seems to scattered and hard to make sence. Try keeping closer to the point

no need to apologize. negative input is always better (more helpful) than positive, although positive is nice to hear ;)

I guess your right though, I was about to fall asleep and I got the first four lines and jumped outta bed to write them down and ended up just writing the rest there aswell. Im not even sure I know what it's about, i think I just like some of the wording.

I will probably revisit it tonight and fix it up, but who knows. there are some very weak parts.

Thanks for your input.