Sun People

Heres a song I wrote, still need a bit of help with it... it makes more sense with the music to it.

so here we go...its entitled "SUN PEOPLE"...and it was inspired after a friday night with the boys and some "rootbeer"
enjoy.
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Lobster People around me scream as their skin falls off in layers.
Someone fetch me the healing cream which protects from those alien haters.
Hairspray doesn't cause the steam which heats our planet's air.
Little people who are slightly green- fight them if you dare.

Do you wanna go on a Trip with me? it'll be very fun.
we plan on flying strait into the sun.
sippin' on rootbeer, we'll get cooked until we're thoroughly done!
Baked like lasagna in the heart of the sun.

Santa Clause is unemployed as his homeland leaves him, crying.
It arches above in its evil joy, all plants droop, slowly dieing.
Scientists are so annoyed that the CFC's are rising.
Little green men with smiles so coy, make me feel like fighting.

SUN PEOPLE (ooohhh oh oh!)

Hey look ahead, that flaming orb of gas appears to be the sun.
Fire radiates out like smoke from the chamber of a gun.
this may seem farfetched, but someone's gotta be there to make it run.
maintained all these years, not a thing could be left undone.

SUN PEOPLE (ohhh OHH OHH)

Why do you oppress us so? it feels like we're locked in a boiling cellar.
"Excuse me," they reply, "don't speak so slow, we're not Hellen Keller.
but there is one thing you should know, its something we've tried to tell her.
you call us sun people, but from now on no- we prefer to be called sun dwellers."

Heres part two- a separate song, but still the same thing. if part one is from our point of view, this is from the sun people's.

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Why do you run? far too much is undone.
Don't you know you set your controls to the heart of the sun?
Why do you look so strange? are you also divinely arranged?
Everyday we maintain the heart of the sun.

Is that dark thing your brain? Why doesn't light pump through your veins?
in the end, its all kryptonite, the last star you see tonight.
Eyes squeezed tight, you push on? wasn't it you who wish on
starlight, star bright, the first star you see tonight.

You look quite weary. it's the man's fault, clearly.
We too get weak, but do you think the sun runs itself?
Why put up a Fight? everything out there is night.
perhaps its just me, but obviously the sun runs itself.

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Have your people destroyed their homes?
Do your leaders want you to destroy our homes too?
They do not condone, but its not all the less done-
we're just dwellers on the sun.

Originally Posted by: rockonn91
Lobster People around me scream as their skin falls off in layers.
Someone fetch me the healing cream which protects from those alien haters.
Hairspray doesn't cause the steam which heats our planet's air.
Little people who are slightly green- fight them if you dare.

Why do you oppress us so? it feels like we're locked in a boiling cellar.
"Excuse me," they reply, "don't speak so slow, we're not Hellen Keller.
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i like it alot, to me it is awesome dude, oh yeah i really like the lines above they were my favorite parts, i guess i like the flavor and feel???? anyways i like the part about helen keller alot too thats funny, its a good song i think, it had me smilin :D

not often i see u post here with ur stuff and im impressed dude...turn it into a song you must...good luck with that braaaah