Well, I probably shouldn't say anything, BUT being that I'm in the mood I am, I'm going to. You really shouldn't post a song on here if you aren't going to be willing to tolerate criticism. That is the purpose for posting a song I believe, not just sharing but for constructive criticsm. I think the lyrics are decent and I'm guesing it fits your genre, bbut understand a lot of people just don't get that type of stuff. Not to say its bad. The quality of music and lyrics all comes down to a personal opinion.