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Bar Chord Nick
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Bar Chord Nick
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Joined: 04/19/05
Posts: 402
04/07/2007 8:29 pm
The drums are better. The song needs more to it I think. A chorus or something to break it up. It gets to repetitive. Maybe even change up the strumming pattern just a bit to give it a less repetitive feel. You might even try picking the chords some times and strumming them others.

Just my 2 cents and with inflation it's really not worth much.