Thanks for the replies guys. I've been practicing my bends all night and can already tell an improvement. I don't know why I've never just practiced bends before... It really helps to have people take a listen and give some good feedback!

Logan, I'm playing that off of a Guitar Pro 5 tab that I downloaded off of mysongbook.com before it got the kibosh threw on it. I don't know if you have that program, or precisely what the rules are regarding me attaching the file to a post or whatever (seems doubtful, but would be easy). Email me through guitartricks and we'll discuss a further course of action.