Thanks for listening earthman. I've been criticized a bit on this one. Apparently the lyric structure is "incorrect." I have no writing background, so not really sure what that means. Also been told that the lyrics sound like they should be for a folk song rather than the rock song I made it into. Also been told I'm hard to understand and I sound like a 35 year old man. Whatever that means... Perhaps some revision needs to be done on this one in one form or another.

But thanks for listening guys and commenting. Always appreciated.