Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonEveryone's mind works that way, true. But when describing situations to a reader, ones natural inclination is typically to make sure he makes the picture as clear as possible, which leads to wordiness.

I guess.

Anyhow, this minimalism stuff has me intrigued. For the first time I feel like I could be a writer after all.

Now if only I had some Ritalin.....