Originally Posted by: acapellaTo be frank, I'm surprised you all liked this story so much. It seems to me like Brendon got an idea for a story, some good lines, realized he had no actual plot, and made it as quick as possible. It just seems lazy to me. I didn't know that laziness was a style, not to mention a particularly tricky one.

Bitch.

You got it right on. I do plan on making it better and longer at some point this week, though. Right after I redo all my soundclick songs with my new recorder. Man, some of them really suck.