Originally Posted by: aschlemanSomehow... to me, it doesn't seem really genuine. The lyrics are good and tey fit a set rhythm... It just doesn't seem like you're really in it though... It's hard to explain. I get the message and I can sense some emotion but it just seems hollow to me. They're good though... I can't explain whats missing... Just seems like there is something.

My lyrics get ignored a lot too... haha. But it's more for storing purposes so I can come back to them... haha. Keep chuggin away on that one It seems like you have a really good start.

Good call, aschleman. I wouldn't say it isn't genuine, necessarily, because I do mean what I said. However, these were kind of forced lyrics, so maybe that's what gave you the impression it did. Like I said, I wrote everything but the chorus in 15 minutes (which is a new record for me).