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jeffhx
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jeffhx
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07/03/2006 3:47 am
i never knew the sky's so blue
glaring eyes and jaded lives
its times like these i dont know what to do
to see me there creates demise

implicit rules
and explicit lies
come drinking time
colt 45

but today is just not
right
today is far from
right

fire drills
and ecstacy pills
make television
so derogatory

make love shall we
peace, harmony
so much bull****
is life just worth it?

yes the day isnt right
its just too far from alright

terrorism,
racial seclusion
the reigns of fire
come calling under

drinking habits
and understandings
stop pretending
that you know it all

what is out there
is so unknown
dying daisies
its all just not there

could today be right
political crimes

no its not right
do we flee or fight?
[FONT=Impact]grooviest tunes ever [/FONT]
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mdaddict
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mdaddict
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07/03/2006 3:52 am
:) i like it its different i feel it dude its cool keep on writin see ya aussie man
No snowflake in an avalanche ever feels responsible.
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earthman buck
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earthman buck
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07/03/2006 3:57 am
Good stuff, Joshy boy. Here's my favourite parts (in random order):

implicit rules
and explicit lies
come drinking time
colt 45

fire drills
and ecstacy pills
make television
so derogatory

i never knew the sky's so blue
glaring eyes and jaded lives
its times like these i dont know what to do
to see me there creates demise


That third line of the last thing there doesn't seem right to me, but it's still good stuff.
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jeffhx
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jeffhx
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07/03/2006 4:10 am
thanks for the replies dude...some stuff were just random thoughts i wrote
[FONT=Impact]grooviest tunes ever [/FONT]
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jiujitsu_jesus
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jiujitsu_jesus
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07/03/2006 5:29 am
Originally Posted by: earthman buckGood stuff, Joshy boy. Here's my favourite parts:
i never knew the sky's so blue
glaring eyes and jaded lives
its times like these i dont know what to do
to see me there creates demise


Agreed - that one's fantastic!
"It's all folk music... I ain't never heard no horse sing!"
- Attributed variously to Leadbelly and Louis Armstrong

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iiholly
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iiholly
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07/04/2006 4:12 am
fire drills
and ecstacy pills
make television
so derogatory


Nice! GO! yeah.

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GuitarPsy
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GuitarPsy
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07/04/2006 8:39 am
oh bugger, english isn't my native language, so a few words I don't understand, but this song is sweet!
= good music is good drinking =
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