aight guys ive been writing song s for a while and ive never shared them with any one but im gonna share this one cuz i like it it aint very good but i need some opinions corrective criticism and many tips please it aint much and it has a really weird tune its stuipid i dont know but i like storys and weird random lines in asong swry if you were xpectin more it aint much :( at all swry its cheezy too like a lil kid song i wrote it while i was watchin a very cheezy movie



ice cream man oh ice cream man
just give me a lil rocky road in a pan
it dont really matter how many scoops
and dont worry I aint told the troops
but i know how you killed small paul
and everyone else then you grinded them all
ice cream man oh ice cream man
not so innocent anymore are you man

ice cream man oh ice cream man
us kids never stood a chance but we still ran
i know were you keep those special parts
and thats why im hidin in these shoppin carts
ice cream man oh ice cream man
we all have always know your evil plan
i even know how you killed that poor ladies dog
and so geniously hid him behind the big log
ice cream man oh ice cream man
whoops i didnt mean to tell the police your plan
but that really doesnt even matter now
because you killed them all any how
ice cream man oh ice cream man
thats whatcha get for puttin people in ice cream cans
but now you know that youre all dead
so i guess theres nothin to be said
except
ice cream man oh ice cream man
now how does it feel does it even feel real
mr bad guy ice cream man
ice cream man ...............oh ice cream man