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06/21/2006 6:10 pm
Originally Posted by: "ddsmitty of soundclick"Magicninja31:
Really nice guitar parts, the tone on the lead guitar really fit the song well. Your voice is really cool and the vocals were really solid. My only complaint is that the song is a little static. You use the same vocal melody quite a bit, maybe you could add more variety. The chord progression also repeats itself quite a bit. A really cool song, but it needs to change it up at some point. Maybe you could piece together multiple songs and make it a suite. You could call it suite: gutiar rock :D.

And Another.
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06/21/2006 6:12 pm
Originally Posted by: "berkut69 of soundclick"Hey, great recording of guitars and beats! :D Like the intro.
But when the vocals appeared...hm, they sounded kinda strange and I couldn't undestand the lyrics. I think, all you need is masterising your vocal part. I liked guitar-parts, but vocals sound kinda dissapointing.
Regards!
...Big B

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06/21/2006 6:15 pm
And one more for now,

Originally Posted by: "Cam Bastado of soundclick"
"It's Not all about You"

This is a nice straightforward little rocker. It has a nice chunky feel: good beat, fine hollow-sounding lead. The two leads are a bit at odds in some places, but it’s never jarring. What’s not to like?

My only two suggestions are that the bass is quite quiet and also that the structure could stand a bit more variety. Perhaps break the vocal into two parts and feature a nice, clear strong lead in the middle. There’s plenty of lead work, but it’s all heavily effected and a bit muddy. Let a few licks shine in the middle there.

Other than that, given the limitations of what you are doing, it’s nice.

Blessings,

Cam

PS - Some good lines in this song as well. Well done.

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06/21/2006 6:18 pm
Originally Posted by: AkiraI think it sounds great, just needs a bit of tweaking on the mix I think, but especially good for a few hours work.

Woohoo! Yes for a few hours it is pretty good. I'm gonna bring the bass up a notch or two and turn down the verb on the lead.
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