Hey thanks man The the reason the riff gets a little lost would be that i was recording while i was practicing, and this riff just poped out, the rythm track was simply improvised variations. Lots worked some didn't, but over all it held up enough for me to want to slap a solo on it which also worked out for the most part.

Im sorry if ive seemed a little pushy about my sound quality its just that this is old and ive gotten a much better guitar and pickups since then. :D

thanks for the great feedback I don't mind critisisms either as long as they are based on reality. so anybody don't be afraid to comment I don't know anybody in person in which i can get any feedback exept for my older brother but he can be a dick at times. I have much more faith in any guitar tricks members and what they have to say about my music so thanks again.