What do you think?

Hiya all, I am getting back into writing and recording music and was wondering what you think of my first effort (a little ditti in 7/4). I recorded it using a V-amp2 and a old Jem777.


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Oh crap....I posted this twice. :rolleyes:

My humble appologies - Mr Administrator.

Nice shredding! It was technically very good, but it would've sounded even
better with a nice loose riff and some low-slung bass in there. Good job :)

Your very good bud. But I would suggest slowing down for some parts. It's easier to enjoy the shredding when there is a melodic line capped of with shredding instead of one ripping song. Anyways, that's just my 2 cents. Have a good one.

Originally Posted by: ericthecableguyYour very good bud. But I would suggest slowing down for some parts. It's easier to enjoy the shredding when there is a melodic line capped of with shredding instead of one ripping song. Anyways, that's just my 2 cents. Have a good one.

i agree. sounds good though.

I am starting to write more melodic - thought through (and less exciting stuff ) - instead of just blasting it at 1000 mph..

I really donwonnooo though :o

It really seems like all the best melodic stuff has already been done.

u obviosly have very good technique but if u used a better backing track u mite find it would open up more creative things to do in the solo. for instance u could outline the chords etc or u could change to harmonic minor at some points etc. anyway i felt it was very good technique but a bit formless. as has been said it mite help to start slower and then elaborate on the slower riffs making them more elaborarte

overall very good definitely faster than i could play

I accept all these criticisms -and the praise ;) ..Thanks for taken the time to check my stuff out..and I hope you like my new one...Hillbilly2..

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