u obviosly have very good technique but if u used a better backing track u mite find it would open up more creative things to do in the solo. for instance u could outline the chords etc or u could change to harmonic minor at some points etc. anyway i felt it was very good technique but a bit formless. as has been said it mite help to start slower and then elaborate on the slower riffs making them more elaborarte

overall very good definitely faster than i could play