Gotta remix these

I probably posted these before but I gotta remix em cause the originals were done on headphones and came out a little boomy...
any suggestions appreciated.

Recorded on a Mac G3 266/320 using Cubase. All the synths are VST instruments. Guitars are straight line in and then processed with Amplitube.
My vocals and harmonieswere done through a cheap Aria mic and the female vocals were done by Ruth Cocherel in California who recorded em over the internet.
Drums are a combo of a drum machine and loops.

Neon Lies
http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/mp3/NeonLies.mp3

Instrumental
http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/mp3/NeonLiesInst.mp3


Neon Lies
Copyright 2005 K. Taylor/Schmange Music U.K./Canada

VoiceOver:
.... and as the sun goes down in the distant sky
neon signs shine beacons of magnetic light
on the swarming masses of lost souls gathered below
.... and forming lines as far as the eye can see
they gather in pairs to silently enter guarded threshold
.... and with a tear in her eye
one lonely mortal pushes her way to the front of the crowd
alone she is allowed to pass through
*
Lyrics

The evening is alive
Are you deep inside
Where rhythm tears apart
The beating of my heart
*
You wanted make believe
When I wanted love
You promised everything
But that's not enough
*
The evening is alive
Are you deep inside
Where rhythm tears apart
The beating of my heart
*
You wanted make believe
When I wanted love
You promised everything
But that's not enough
*
I want you
*

Those are some nice tracks man. I wouldn't even know where to beign to critique them. They sound cool to me.