Hey good idea! Perhaps I should think about posting a video to help me with technique and such.
Before commenting on your playing I would like to point out that the file type you used was pretty new to me and I had nothing to play it. I did a little searching tho and found this player for download which worked really well.
http://www.download.com/FLV-Player/3000-2139_4-10467082.htmlSo there...other people can download ur video and the player and they'll be fine.
Ok so now for the review. I looked through the video about 5 times and i think your playing was pretty good. It was particularly clean and all but you weren't really playing anything to show off your technique (i.e: sweeping, bending notes, legato, tapping, etc...) It was pretty much powerchords and some single note stuff. I did notice, however, that you didn't use your pinky that much (I think only once in the whole video) and that could be a problem. One thing I started doing recently and I find it to be VERY efficient is using your pinky for powerchords. So for the powerchord shape you were holding in your video you would use your first finger and your pinky. It doesn't sound like that big a difference but I found that when you play fast powerchord stuff and are sliding powerchords all over the place it sounds a little smoother. That's how it's been for me anyway. Also it will help you get used to using your pinky more which I'm not sure if you use all that much. I can't really tell from the video. So yeah thats my full review.
Another thing that might be good to mention is to buy shirts that cover your whole body. :D I mean...I love manly chests as much as the next guy but...I just ate...c'mon now! At least warn us first.