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magicninja
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magicninja
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10/17/2005 6:21 pm
Try using a different word for mask if it doesn't mess up the flow such as cover, disguise, etc. Repetition is murder for songwriters. I keep a thesaurus handy when I write. I like to think the great ones do the same. So
try this

Because behind this mask I hide
behind the disguise I hide
beneath the cover my soul has died

Just an idea.
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