A song I co. wrote

My friend and I wrote this song Run Hide (beware) [Rock] we tried to make it all sound sinister let us know what you think about these lyrics. Thanks....

Run Hide (Beware) By Balin' Twine

I come looking for you, you run hide in holes in the ground
your tears fall like the rains that I bring after I rape your town
death descends in shades of grey fall to your knees beg and pray
lightning flashes in the sky frightened children scream and cry
I rain down death and pain to man beast and fowl of the air
thunder sounds and shakes the ground you live in fear forever beware

Chorus

I have stalked this land (Beware) from the very dawn of time (Beware)
With out remorse took countless lives never known death immortality is mine

Your technology means nothing to me I've been studied all of your lives
fear what nature can bring, I can show you things to torture your eyes
Saints, sinners, peasants, and Kings ranks, religion, region, or clime
nothing can stand in my way now that it's my time
I lust for destruction and pain you look to the sky
your science is week your theories are flawed just think this
terrible thing is a gift from your God

Chorus X 2

I have over a thousand names and every one rings fear
I move right through just like a train the defining sound fills your ears
rip and tear and scatter debris everything crumbles and fall before me
dreams will be shattered tears will be shed pick up the pieces and count your dead
for the lucky ones who have survived my attack plan prepare try to predict
I'm gone for now but some day I'll be back

Chorus X 2

honestly, i'm a little scared....
and i can't figure out wut its about

It's about a tornado.

I like it all except the line "I come looking for you, you run hide in holes in the ground." That line just reminds me of a bunny.

Well the most scared I've ever been was a time I was fishing in a bay in Galveston (in a boat) when a storm rolled through chopping up the water, causing us to have to beach on a little sandbar island and wait while several funnel clouds formed and a small waterspout dropped all the way several hundred yards away...so truly a terrifying subject anyways.

Your vocalist sounds too much like the guy from Green Jelly.

it was awesome. i really liked it, especially after I knew it was about a tornado. then it all made sense, it was a really good song...

thats really cool......