Dare I poke fun at pop punk? ...I dare


Jolly McJollyson
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06/21/2005 4:37 am
Katie...she was my girlfriend
but now I'm cryin'
because she ran away
Katie...she said she loved me
but she was lyin'
got nothin' else to say

Music...is all I have now
Because my Katie
Was my heart and soul
Music...is what I'm playing
because my lady
thought she would take a toll.

WOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!
So go your own way Katiiieeeee
WOoooooooooooooooaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Get up and walk away!
Woooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
You know I loved you Katie!
Woooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
And this is what I'll say!

Driving...My pontiac trans am
well it's not quite mine
but it's my Dad's trans am
Driving...down throught the suburbs
I'm feelin' so fine
I've got a rockin' plan!

Swimming...down at the beachfront
I brought my guitar
of the acoustic kind
Singing...down on the beachfront
playing my guitar
but you're not on my mind!

WOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!
So go your own way Katiiieeeee
WOoooooooooooooooaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Get up and walk away!
Woooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
You know I loved you Katie!
Woooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
And this is what I'll say!

Parents...don't like my music
They say it's too loud
But I'm a rebel, dude
Parents...Say turn that noise down
I say I'm too proud
Those guys don't have a clue!

Rebel...I'm pretty hardcore
I stayed up way late
Because my curfew blows
Rebel...I won't just conform
You'll see what I state
In my Hot Topic clothes!

WOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!
So go your own way Katiiieeeee
WOoooooooooooooooaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Get up and walk away!
Woooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
You know I loved you Katie!
Woooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
And this is what I'll say!

My Dad...He says to come home
He says I'm out late
And he can't trust my friends
My Dad...he's such a jackass
Always on my case
Good god it never ends

Come home...it's after midnight
he never listens
when my expressions flow
Got home...it's after midnight
I hope you'll hear me
in my guitar solo

(solo consists of three, possibly six, notes, repeated over and over)

WOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!
So go your own way Katiiieeeee
WOoooooooooooooooaaaaaaahhhh!!!
Get up and walk away!
Woooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
You know I loved you Katie!
Woooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaahhh!!!
And this is what I'll say!
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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06/21/2005 4:41 am
haha once again another master peice
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06/21/2005 4:52 am
LMAO- funny **** man, i like the oh im hardcore part simply because thats so god damn true...dont you just love to hear some little good charlotte kid say how hes as hard as it gets?
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06/21/2005 2:05 pm
wow, thanks for taking up a few more min. of my life that I will never get back....ha ha. Kinda had a cliche Blink 182 type feel to it.
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06/21/2005 9:16 pm
And it shows no signs of stopping.
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06/22/2005 1:46 am
HAHAHA
holy ****, that was hilarious... i hate those pop-punk emo kids...
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06/22/2005 12:57 pm
(solo consists of three, possibly six, notes, repeated over and over)

LOL! laughing my buttocks off here :p
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06/22/2005 7:27 pm
Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollyson(solo consists of three, possibly six, notes, repeated over and over)

6 notes! I think that would sound a little more punk than the pop punk feel you are going for. I personally would stick with 3, [U]maybe[/U]
4 notes, tops.
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06/22/2005 11:04 pm
Ha... best song you've written in a while. I'm proud.

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06/23/2005 4:12 pm
The solo could be the pattern you mentioned and for the big climax raise it a whole step just before going back into the rest of the song.
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They Said To Play It Louder Than Hell, We Promised That We Would

Hulk Smash!!

Whatever you do, don't eat limes. A friend of mine ate a lime once and BAM!! Two years later. Herpes.
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Jolly McJollyson
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06/23/2005 4:16 pm
Originally Posted by: Cryptic ExcretionsThe solo could be the pattern you mentioned and for the big climax raise it a whole step just before going back into the rest of the song.

Well, it can't do that and remain in key...however, I could lower it a bit and stay in key...
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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06/23/2005 9:21 pm
Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonWell, it can't do that and remain in key...however, I could lower it a bit and stay in key...

It's pop-punk. Since when does theory apply? Just pull **** out of your ass and be done with it. Make millions, tour the world, get women, for doing next to nothing.
The Gods Made Heavy Metal, And They Saw That It Was Good
They Said To Play It Louder Than Hell, We Promised That We Would

Hulk Smash!!

Whatever you do, don't eat limes. A friend of mine ate a lime once and BAM!! Two years later. Herpes.
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06/25/2005 6:03 pm
Originally Posted by: Cryptic ExcretionsIt's pop-punk. Since when does theory apply? Just pull **** out of your ass and be done with it. Make millions, tour the world, get women, for doing next to nothing.

Money or respect as a musician........hard dicision.
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06/29/2005 10:02 pm
Originally Posted by: x0o_BurnOut_o0xLMAO- funny **** man, i like the oh im hardcore part simply because thats so god damn true...dont you just love to hear some little good charlotte kid say how hes as hard as it gets?

Just on that...anyone in the Uk read last weeks Kerrang...? how funny was that interview page with the Kids at the Greenday Milton Keynes show?
I was there tho...on the Sunday...and what a great show.

money or musical respect?...atleast you'll have respect as a songwriter either way...you really do amaze me dude....

Is Katie real?does she know how poetic and all old Jolly is? and she left...I thought girls were supposed to like that stuff! :eek:
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