Guitar Solo!!!

:) Right guitar solo , i wrote this for my emo band(wierd eh?) its like a punk chord sequence, but i think it fits well. please tell me what you think.

oh my god :eek: shocked does not describe it!!! my dog seemed very interested in it, though she seemed slightly worried by it, came an sat on my knee!
i guess you like to speed up your voices, atleast i hope thats it, other than that somethings got caught in a vice!

thats allto do with ya other stuff though not got much to say otherwise!!