evry body knew it but me rock

this song is on my website www.bigcees.com

EVERYBODY KNEW IT BUT ME

v-1
now i see why ive been running round
and feeling cut off
now that im looking i can see right through
the big fascade that you put up
i guess you figured i just had to know
cause it was just to plain to see
but one thing i aint figured out
how rverybody knew it but me

bridge

thought i was going crazy
thought i lost my mind
thought everyone was out to get me
all of this time

chorus

cuz evrybody knew it but me
hell a blind man he would have seen
eveybody new it but me
all this time

v-2

never thought youd be the devil
the thought never crossed my mind
you said that i was good for you
but i was tricked by your hainous discuise
but now youve been running round
with your new boyfriend
although i was the last to know
bitch this is where your party ends

bridge

chorus then solo then chorus

v-3

i thought you got off way to easy
its time to chalk one up for me
the girl your new boyfriend was with last night
was set up by me
yes i had to pay her really well
but she really loved my scam
now you know that his undieing love
was nothing but a sham

bridge

chorus

end

listen to this song at www.bigcees.com

its too slow for me and dont make my head shake

ok, I just listened to it, and umm, well, first of all I gotta say I didn't like how fuzzy the guitar was, also you probably could've turned the bass up on your guitar some more. and the drums really sounded like they came from a drum machine. and an outro would be nice. other than that, although this isn't really the style of music I'm in to, I gotta say it was pretty good, keep up the good work.

thanks for the feed back keep in mind its just a crappy demo tape and that i am an 80,s guru not into the metalica and speed metal i was a hair band rocker ha ha thanks clint i will be posying some knew rock stuff there soon
just need time to post it onto my web page www.bigcees.com

thanks clint

dude, sweet :)
i like it its actualy really good, not my style since im more of a heavy/death metal fan but thats actauly ok, guitars a bit fuzzy though but other then that cool

thanks corworshiper i know what can i say i love the 80,s style
appreciate the reply big c

sick stuff man, i like the fuzz! And i like RATT i admit it! good stuff man
i like the vocals, is that you dude?
I also listened to that horseshoe song, thats hardcore **** man! its a lil to much for me but nice! with some lead ontop ya know country trikels
keep on posten dude good stuff

thanks dude
yes thats all me except the drum machine i more less use it as a metronome tried doing it with real drums and it sounds like crap and i just cant get myself to invest in some drum mics so i just use the drum machine for the demos that i post to the internet site the recordings that are posted to the internet are not as good as the masters the sound quality is way less than what is on the studio i guess the studio is just not compatable with the pc
thanks for the comments i will post more songs in the future just need time to do it

Try using ReCycle and creating your own drum loops. You can invest in several royalty free drum loop and sample CD's as well. (or just go net trolling)
Then use ReCycle to fix the timing, add effects or change the pitch and spit the result out as a Rex file.
Once you've finished the song, you can go back and add in some real drum sounds or do your own loops to give it more of a live sound.

yah i will look into that. i never thought of hunting down drum loops and burning them to cd i just dont get into the hight tech computer stuff checking e-mail and posting here is about as computer savey as i get....
all my recordings are played directly from the studio card and played through movie maker where it is rerecorded through windows movie maker and thats how i post them and that is also where the sound quality is lost you cant mix real well with the movie maker