ok, I just listened to it, and umm, well, first of all I gotta say I didn't like how fuzzy the guitar was, also you probably could've turned the bass up on your guitar some more. and the drums really sounded like they came from a drum machine. and an outro would be nice. other than that, although this isn't really the style of music I'm in to, I gotta say it was pretty good, keep up the good work.
