Critic please

I believe everyone has disected this about 50 times and everyone had excellent points so heres mine.

The intro was killer.....made me wanna look over my shoulder hunting the grim reaper or somethin. And the rythm was fairly decent, better than I could've done, no doubt. But everyone that said there needed to be a solo somewhere in the middle, I'd have to agree. Something that brings back that dark feeling from the intro. Excellent Performance my friend. I also would like to hear more of your work.

Take Care,
D.H.

Very well done. It very melodic and I could easily put a catchy vocal track to this one. Guitars sound great. It's not about the technique or complexity - it's all in how it makes you feel. This song rocks. Very pop-pun kish a la Sum 41. Nice work on the drum programming too.

a D- for using Soundclick and an F for spelling 'Critique' wrong.

[QUOTE=Blizzard_UK]Schmange, your file took 6 minutes to get to my ears because I had to wait for it, my point is, I did wait for it. I can't say it was worth the wait though.

If it took 6 minutes it's got nothing to do with me.
You should update your plug-ins preferences so that the songs start immediately. When I click on direct link mp3's, it takes less than one second for the song to start regardless of its size.

like everyone else said the intro and chorus are different but i like the song is awesome anyways.

I like it, and i wouldnt even say i like that genre. yeah this is pretty sweet man. who cares if its easy. bb king is known for his simple, yet awesome solos

rock on

I agree it songs pretty simplistic but sometimes its the simplistic songs that kick ass! :p overall i thought it was a sick song!

I liked it! So did my wife! Anyway I can get the tab / chord sheet to this?

VERY NICE!

--Mark
[email]mdn5407@adams.net[/email]

Absolutely; i will make the tabs, but its going to take some time because I am pretty busy right now.

I like the song, it reminds me of older Metallica. :-)

SDFO
in the key of E Major/Db minor

Intro (4x)
Dbm```````````````A```````````````E

|---------|---------|---------|--------|-------|--------|-------|-------|
|---------|---------|---------|--------|-------|--------|-------|-------|
|-----1---|-----1---|-----1---|----1---|---1---|---1---|---1---|---1---|
|---2---2-|---2---2-|---2--2-|---2--2-|--2--2-|--2--2-|--2--2-|--2--2-|
|-4-------|-4-------|-0-------|-0------|-------|-------|-------|--------|
|---------|---------|---------|--------|-0-----|-0-----|-0-----|-0------|

Chorus (4x)
E`````````````B``````````````Dbm`````````````````A

P.M.``````````P.M.--``````````P.M.````P.M.`````````P.M.
|--------------|----------------|----------------------|-----------------|
|--------------|----------------|----------------------|-----------------|
|--------------|----------------|----------------------|-----------------|
|-----9--7--6--|---------7--6--|----------------------|---------------6-|
|--7-----------|------9---------|------11------11(Sl.)-|--(7)--7(Sl.)9----|
|--------------|---7------------|---9------12---------|---5--------------|


please note the the "```" doesn't represent musical notation. It is used for the computers lack of cooperation in regard to placement of notation.

Verse (8x)
Dbm```````A````````E````````E

(this is only on the last 4)
|----------|---------|----------|---------|
|----------|---------|----------|---------|
|----------|---------|----------|---------|
|--6-----6-|-6-----6-|-6---9---|--6--6-7-|
|----7-----|---7-----|---7----7-|---7-----|
|------9---|-----5---|----------|---------|



Bridge (2x)
Dbm

|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---7-6---|-----7-6-|-------------|-----------|
|-9-------|---9------|---11----11-|---11------|
|---------|-7--------|-9----12----|-9----12---|

A
`````````P.M.
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---7-6---|-----7-6-|-------------|-----------|
|-9-------|---9------|---11----11-|---11------|
|---------|-7--------|-9----12----|-9----12---|

B

|--------|--------|--------|--------|
|--------|--------|--------|--------|
|--------|--------|--------|--------|
|-6----6-|-6----6-|-6--9--|-6--6-7-|
|---7----|---7----|---7--7-|--7-----|
|-----9--|-----7--|--------|--------|

Dbm

|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---------|----------|------------|-----------|
|---7-6---|-----7-6-|-------------|-----------|
|-9-------|---9------|---11----11-|---11------|
|---------|-7--------|-9----12----|-9----12---|



Dbm A B Dbm (2x with guitar solo2 over 128 bars)

Dbm (2x clean)

Intro (2x in double time)

Verse (3/4times and last 4 with melody)

Chorus

Originally Posted by: HambergErie Like Alice in Chains? I've been trying to figure out their secert but im am at a loss. :(

Open strings in chords, especially where you wouldn't normally see them.


I tried to listen, but soundclick wasn't interested in cooperating.