The intro was killer.....made me wanna look over my shoulder hunting the grim reaper or somethin. And the rythm was fairly decent, better than I could've done, no doubt. But everyone that said there needed to be a solo somewhere in the middle, I'd have to agree. Something that brings back that dark feeling from the intro. Excellent Performance my friend. I also would like to hear more of your work.
Take Care,
D.H.