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iiholly
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iiholly
hmm
Joined: 07/29/02
Posts: 2,368
12/14/2004 7:03 pm
Its alright, the chorus would be fine with good vocals and backing. The verse though you should maybe search deeper into what you're trying to say. I'm sure you don't want a song just filled with cliche generalizations.