Can I expose this to people?

Ok so I thought about applying for a bunch of schools, thus sending them demotapes.
I don't know how high soundquality-requirements they have, but I don't
want to come out like a complete ass, so what I want to know is:
Do you think this recording is ok, meaning that you hear what's played without
trying to hard? Can I send it to people without being laughed at?
If not, what should I improve?
Help would be greatly appreciated!
Here it is:

http://www.angelfire.com/falcon/mystery/granjota.mp3

ye the recording is better than ok its quite good, wot did u record it using?u can hear bit of muffle from the background (probably the recorder u used) but im sure that won't matter. It sounds good 2 me!

it sunds sorta brittle...i guess its what u recorded it with...work on part where u go up the chromatic scale before all the triplet pull offs

It's recorded with a $2 mic and Goldwave demo.

Ok I'll work on that part. Maybe I can use equalizer or something?
Thanks for the replies!

pretty impressive, $2 mic wow, Goldwave any good. Its an awsome recording i mean for your gear what guitar did you use? I can't even get my stuff working properly to loud and choppy. I use Cakewalk 2002 home studio

The quality was fine. Very good for a cheap mic.
The playing was great too ;)

Are you on a steel string or a classical with a high pitch?


[i mean it sounds great i was just wondering]