Ok, so the recording is nice and tight and it is well recorded. However, how about a song with vocals and all that ? I'm not a shredder and really cant compete in the notes per min department and I'm not a huge fan of Steve Vie etc so please take my criticisms with a pinch of salt cos I'm not in tune with the whole shred thing but I'd go for the dynamic and add some structure and a hook of some sort.
Anyway keep on plucking dude !