But the playing is sloppy. I can't even tell what you're doing in the beginning, are those sweeps? You need to clean those up a bit, and practice a little more before the next take.
I like the rest of the tune, except for a few points. To start off, I like the more rockish sections a lot, thats what separates just neoclassical, from progressive rock, or metal, whatever you want to call it, very cool. But some of the neoclassical parts, especially the pedaltones are just way boring.
And the mixing needs work, as well as the drum programming.
Once again, I like the music... very cool, but I think it needs some work.
