Sorry if this seems harsh, but here's my honest critique. The open chord arrangement is very cliche and been done a thousand times before. Also, your singing is a bit off (wavering out of key here and there), but more importantly, your tone is very droney. I don't know if Kurt Cobain is a big influence of yours, but I would recommend taking professional singing lessons. You certainly have potential (and the lyrical content itself is decent), but improvement in those areas could really benefit you. That's my opinion.