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concrete chaos
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concrete chaos
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01/26/2004 2:40 pm
ok this is my problem here

Both versions are good - i prefer the first draft which i know was the main text and u wanted to turn it into lyrics.

but why do u have to convert it so to speak into lyric form

ok i know that u dont have to, but like i dunno it always feels like its because of this lyric type feel that i cant write 'songs' cus they seem to be lacking [yea of the music and vocals haha]

MMM i dunno do u usually listen to totally non mainstream bands that have prose like lyrics or something it can be done for sure - u know do whats best for ur own way.

Ahhh this thinking..drives me nuts..:O

i dont like he structure it has now verse/chorus/verse type of pattern....

ok thats no help to you.

I like what ur getting at but i liked it better when it ws whole not done up to be lyrics.


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