here we go, this is just a rough draft of what I've come up with so far:
why must it be so hard
to let these thoughts go free
the walls of the mind
surrounded by me
why...must it be so hard
why...must it feel so bad
why...must I feel this way
why...can't I be set free
lost thoughts are born each day
though they alway's fade away
full of void and soaked with sadness
emptyness is all I feel
why...must it be so hard
why...must it feel so bad
why...must I feel this way
why...can't I be set free
I know it'll probalby change some once I put some music to it, but at least closer than I was. what do ya'll think?