Your quick, but it also sounds like your just randomly going up the scale as fast as you can. Also your distortion is disquising alot of your sloppiness, play it on a clean or acoustic guitar. A heavy distorted guitar is not the best way to practice technique. Other than that, for playing less than a year you have some talent and good potential but you need to work on your precision and basics. Only play what you can play well, especially for other people to judge. ;)