Try the G7 as a G9, played as (x20201). A nice voicing for that progression. Adds alittle singing tone to the chord which sounded kinda bland.
E7(b13)/C becomes E7#9(b13), played as (x30103). I like the voicing for the very reason it adds alittle singing tone to that half of the movement. Also builds to the suspence of going to C major 2 chords later.
Just a thought.
[Edited by noticingthemistake on 10-27-2003 at 05:11 PM]
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