Don't like that part.
The rest of it is ok. Some of the words seem like they were only used to complete a rhyme. There is no overall rhyme scheme and that gets a little awkward.
It's ok.
Sometimes I hit notes only dogs can hear.
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Puppets dance to and fro?
Don't like that part.
The rest of it is ok. Some of the words seem like they were only used to complete a rhyme. There is no overall rhyme scheme and that gets a little awkward.
It's ok.
Don't like that part.
The rest of it is ok. Some of the words seem like they were only used to complete a rhyme. There is no overall rhyme scheme and that gets a little awkward.
It's ok.
