This is okay, but nothing special, tell me what you think:

Puppet Show

(Starts out as almost a classical ballad)

The curtain goes up,
The lights go down,
And now we commence the show.

Puppets in dress,
Puppets in gown,
Puppets dance to and fro.

But the interesting thing is who's holding the strings
And the man who does that is controlling the play!

But who is this man who has puppets in hand?
For the puppets will echo the things he will say!

Puppets will dance
Puppets will prance
Puppets to...entertain,
but the man who's behind it is quite single minded
and all of us do all the things he commands!

Puppets all twisted
For puppets resisted
But puppets don't last very long.
For the man who controlls it proceeds to unfold it
And then we realize we aren't in our own hands.

(Suddenly gets a lot faster)

The puppeting man raises puppeting hand
removing his veil to reveal who he is
And though it may shock you, it truly will rock you,
Only he can decide who is passing the quiz!

The puppeteer, with an evil leer
Rejects every one who tells him what to do.
And ironically it is I who called he
When the true puppet dancing had really begun.